WRITE EMAIL TO NEW 195 STUDENTS FOR WINTER TERM
PUT WRITING NOTICE ON THE 195 WEBPAGE AND DIRECT THEM TO READ IT.

The paper still also exhibits some grammar/spelling/typo problems.

Reminder: Always write history in past tense. These events have already happened. These speakers have already spoken about their stories.

The paper still also exhibits some grammar/spelling/typo problems and a number of awkwardly worded sentences, which let to unsupported statements.