To you, which story in Part Four is the best example of "the turning point" in the war? Which account in Part Five is the best example of the "ending" of the war, to you? You supported your story choice in the second part better than the part, although I definitely agree with your story choice. It lacked some source citations that would have made for a stronger case, such as you did at the end. Overall, good job. I certainly liked your story choices, but your paper was much too brief, lacking any real development of the examples and without external citations. Did you run out of time or something? Be careful to re-read your papers. There are a number of typos/mistakes that hurt the readability of your paper. Your second account is a bit brief, focusing on ARVN soldiers, without making a strong connection to the "end" of the war. Still, the quality of your papers has increased over the term. Nice job. I agree with your story choices and you made strong connections to the "turning point" and "end" themes in the original question. Your story choices were unique, and I was looking forward to seeing how you used them to answer the journal question. But your paper was much too brief, lacking any real development of the examples and without external citations. In both parts, your connection to my journal question was very vague. In each part, you include just a bit of information included in each story, but that information was not really central to the theme of each story. (Bernhardt's foot rot and the lady who spoke to McCain) And, more importantly, you don't take the time to explain why each is an example of the "turning point" or "end".