Common Comments
Patriots Journal #1

A >=23 - excellent work
B >=20 - above average work
C >=18 - average
D >=15 - below average

I think your comments are right on the mark.

There are a number of typos, spelling mistakes, and/or grammar problems which hurt the readability of your comments.  Be sure to type your posts in a word processor, spell and grammar check them first, then copy and paste them into these Moodle assignments/forums.

Be sure to answer all questions, in your case, see questions 7 and 8 in my Patriots Journal #1 Notes

Be sure to take the time to answer all of the questions thoroughly.  They are not the type which can be answered in a sentence or less.